My Lady in Black....

[henryalg01]

friend of mine asked me to come along just having fun no commercial, why not maybe i can get something good...
so what do you think ?

 

[tirediron]

Very nice! I can easily see this as a commerical shot; I'm not usually a big fan of cropped limbs, especially at joints, but in this case it really seems to have no effect on the image.

 

[henryalg01]

ty ...i use 2 flash shot to the background

 

[Demers18]

I think this is a great shot and would definitely work as an advertisement, even for your own brand.

 

[henryalg01]

wow Demers i never think that far...but thank you veryyy nice compliment

 

[timor]

I am on this with the others, very good work, very much commercial like. You've got there nice model.

 

[TimothyJinx]

Love this one!

 

[amolitor]

There's a lot to like here, no mistake!

My quibbles are:

- fan is slightly cropped at the left edge and I wish it was not.
- the upper edge of her, especially her hair, looks like you did a clumsy job of cutting her out. Since it sounds like you did NOT cut her out, I suggest that perhaps you over-sharpened her a bit, along this edge.

 

[henryalg01]

yea... i think i over-sharpened a bit...anyway thak you guys i like it too

 

[Azurite180]

Beautiful shot.

Stylistically, I think your name should be a fraction higher above the fan

And I'd like to see more curl and/or softness to her hair. It looks like it's been over gelled/sprayed/moussed but that's a female opinion Everything else works great.

 

[henryalg01]

Thank you Azurite i will remember that