Mops & Brooms, CC Appreciated

[acparsons]

 

[sleist]

Interesting idea and a nice set. My favorite is number 6.
A few of these have some harsh lighting/reflections/shadows, but not too bad. #1 and #2 suffer a bit here.
Your use of DOF is very good in some of these but not so much in others - #2 is an example of where I think the DOF choice hurts.

I would like to see more of this, but without the dirty mops - YMMV.
Overall, a nice idea with a couple of standout shots.

 

[manaheim]

Disturbing.

I love 6. The last one is very neat, too.

 

[acparsons]

Interesting idea and a nice set. My favorite is number 6.
A few of these have some harsh lighting/reflections/shadows, but not too bad. #1 and #2 suffer a bit here.
Your use of DOF is very good in some of these but not so much in others - #2 is an example of where I think the DOF choice hurts.

I would like to see more of this, but without the dirty mops - YMMV.
Overall, a nice idea with a couple of standout shots.

Thanks for the feedback.

 

[dxqcanada]

I find most of these shots have weak composition.
#6 is the best out of the group. #5 and #11 have potential if reshot.
The use of the front on flash does not help the subjects ... to harsh and the shadows.

You should continue with this topic, but try taking the shots with/without flash and multiple angles/focal lengths of the same subject.

 

[Braineack]

7 and 8 hold my interest.