Slowing the shutter from 1/200th to 1/150th or 1/100th would also have provided more ambient light.Thanks @gryphonslair99!
Thats the first thing my wife said too; can you add light to that wall! Could have centred the text also.
The 200WS Neewer Tornado Could Barely light the scene at f8 15'. Added a speedlight at full power, f7.1, 35mm, should have switched/ tried @ 70mm but I forgot to move lights, became a racket and ran out of time.
As good of an excuse as any to get another mono-light. I add gear when I add a need and run out of options.