Tiny pump

[Christie Photo]

I shot this today for use in a company brochure. The hand was used for scale.

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y7/ChristiePhoto/pump.jpg

I left plenty of room, as I'm sure it will be cropped much tighter.

Pete

[The_Traveler]

critique removed by poster.

**image removed**

Please do not post edits of other member's photos without their permission. (edited by Chase)

[Christie Photo]

Traveler... delete MY image from your post.

[The_Traveler]

Perhaps you might turn on the option in your profile that says 'my pictures are not OK to edit.'

[nabero]

I like how this is set up :) The product itself is obviously the focus, but I think a bit of illumination on the bullet points would work too...as they are they're a bit hard to read (but then again...my eyes are getting old ;))

Cheers!

[Olympus8MP]

Maybe a little more DOF would make the bullet points easier to read? I like the composition, though.

[Christie Photo]

Thanks! I'm told that I may not have been shallow enough for thier tastes. They may blur it a bit.

[Christie Photo]

This is how the project ended... FINALLY!

http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y7/ChristiePhoto/tinypumb.jpg

[mysteryscribe]

Looks good to me... One of the things I was surprised by was on another forum I suggested someone add something like a dollar bill to show scale and they were shocked. The idea that an illustrative image needed a scale was a brand new concept to some of them.

the pencil worked as well as the hand.

[Jeff Canes]

nice job