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manda
05-27-2004, 03:41 AM
if i were to shake off the moon
with a kick from the last sin
i wonder how she'd caress and effect him again
without mistrust or wanton lust;
would her measures of happiness
ride on the backs of his minutes
or feast upon a soiled minion of other names before it;
to mistemper and feed her shadowed fables
within the mind
of swallowed
discomfort and salicity...

oh begone hankering hour.

motcon
05-27-2004, 06:40 PM
i've read this on and off for the last two hours. each time i do see something different. just as in a photograph, a good one should tug at our soul to visit it time and again, seeing something differently and/or some of the same more deeply than the previous visit.

i've yet to be able to summarize my thoughts on this piece. i like that.

perhaps all i can give you is silence and all i can tell you is that it moves. every time.

manda
05-28-2004, 01:44 AM
Thank you Will.